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evlpez
post Dec 14 2003, 10:39 AM
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Discuss this story here.


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post Dec 14 2003, 10:46 AM
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That was brilliant! You have me hooked, what happens?! thumbsup.gif


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post Dec 14 2003, 12:01 PM
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Pink, the Ferret wheel is the place where the first to call 'dibbs' gets to write the next installment. Feel free to continue the story.


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post Dec 14 2003, 09:39 PM
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OK - I've posted the second installment of this story. This is a fun one. Let me know what y'all think.
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post Dec 14 2003, 11:52 PM
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Fabulous, agrippa! I like where you've taken us, and I like Serena!


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post Dec 15 2003, 07:35 AM
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Bakbam - you had the same idea I had - Neville as Herbology prof. Excellent!

Do you think you could edit your post to get the verbs in the past tense? I think we started that way and then kinda jumped around. (Some of that's my fault with the "wand" flashback.)
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post Dec 15 2003, 09:19 AM
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Excellent, bakbam! Professor Longbottom ROCKS! And I LOVE that Luna's the DADA Professor. I had originally envisioned James as the oldest Potter child, but I really like that you've given him an older sister. I think this really builds on James' characterization as someone living in the shadow of his family. Well done! Do you see more Potters currently at Hogwarts?


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post Dec 15 2003, 01:48 PM
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I did this so I would be less confused. Is this right, so far?

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post Dec 15 2003, 01:56 PM
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Yay! I was going to do up a tree, but this looks much better than I could've made.
Looks right so far!

Right now we only know the ages of James and Serena. I just made Freddy and Lily pranksters instead of proper prefects, so they could be in any year after 1st really, not just 5th, 6th or 7th. Albert could be up to a year old (or he might have been walking in the first flashback).

Gosh - I can just see Gryffindor Common Room full of redheaded Weasleys! laugh.gif


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post Dec 15 2003, 04:13 PM
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This is much better! I was getting confused 'cause my poor brain hurts (and I was distraught about the mysterious death of Fred).


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post Dec 15 2003, 04:30 PM
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“If anyone asks,” said Freddy solemnly, “we’ve been in here the whole time.”


Wonderful!
Oh, I'm so happy people are writing! hyper.gif This is going to be a really great story when it's done. I know it.


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post Dec 15 2003, 04:41 PM
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I have a question, Evlpez: is there anything behind the name Albert for the baby? Not that it's important... but is it a variation of Albus?

Also, I picked Serena (Latin: calm) because it's the opposite of her personality, which I find amusing.
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post Dec 15 2003, 05:51 PM
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I have a question, Evlpez: is there anything behind the name Albert for the baby? Not that it's important... but is it a variation of Albus?


Yup. I thought it wouldn't be as obvious as Albus.


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post Dec 15 2003, 09:22 PM
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I was just wondering if you had anyone in mind for Philip McKenzie Uncle?

Ok please proof read my next part. I am having diffeculty reading the screen , and the letters on my keyboard seem to be moving around. Or maybe I am just tired and my eyes are crossing..................No It is the keyboard , definetly the keyboard. blink.gif


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post Dec 16 2003, 07:31 AM
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I didn't really have anyone in mind for Philip's uncle. I didn't know if it would play into the plot or not. I think I'm ready to get them off the train, though. And we need to name the owl.
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