Comments on the story Point Taken cassirin commented: Don't know why, but I love the mental image of the tomato soup as a murky red mud puddle. I don't know why...

. I think Neville doesn't get enough credit or attention, so I'm really glad you chose to focus on him. Great use of the requirements. I would have liked it to have been based on the book events, rather than movie, but that's just choosy ol' me.
McGonagall's Cat commented: Neville's POV is an interesting avenue to explore. There were a couple places where paragraphing was off, and you obviously wrote from the movie as reference, since Neville was in the detention in the forest in the book.
Springdruidess commented: The story itself was good - my main comment is that in PS/SS, Neville is a part of the group who serves the detention with Hagrid - Ron's stuck in the Hospital Wing at the time. Unfortunately that's all that was running through my head as I read this story.