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> Round Four - The Quidditch Match, Short Story Challenge
evlpez
post Oct 23 2004, 01:45 AM
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It's the final quidditch game of the season at Hogwarts; Gryffindor versus Slytherin for the Quidditch Cup. The game has just begun and Slytherin are ahead by 40 points, though they are using less-than-legal means to stay ahead. Choose a character or characters located in any one of the locations listed below. Describe their experience of the situation and what ideas or actions (if any) they use to help Slytherin continue their lead or help Gryffindor catch up.
  • Gryffindor Spectator Stands

  • Slytherin Spectator Stands

  • Hufflepuff Spectator Stands

  • Ravenclaw Spectator Stands

  • Staff/Public Spectator Stands

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star.gif Unlike Round 3 (The Magic Box Challenge), the submissions for this challenge do not make a continuing story. Each submission must stand alone as a short story.

All submissions must have a unique title and be posted in this topic.




rferret.gif Note to ferrets: Remember that you are writing fan fiction as though you are the Floo-Between user you've chosen. This means that if you've chosen Snape, you are writing as though Snape is writing fan fiction, not as though he is a part of the story. Each character may write as many submissions as they wish for this challenge, as long as each submission is significantly different from their others. The deadline for submissions is Wednesday December 1st.

The Voting Booth for Round 4 will open on Sunday, November 21st. Click this text to go there.

Posts which are not prefaced by the Character Form will be deleted.

When you post, you'll see a button (up by the "code" and "list" buttons) that says "blank character form." If you press that button, the form will appear in your post. Just edit in your character's details and put the body of your text in the middle. If you've chosen not to use a signature for your character, delete that part of the form.

Do not edit your submissions for this challenge once they are posted in the Forum.


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post Nov 29 2004, 10:33 AM
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The Worthy Always Win

“We’re winning!” the brilliant Pansy Parkinson shouted excitedly over all the blabbering.

The Slytherin team was in the lead, as it always is.

A jet of silver light shot from the Gryffindor stands, stunning the Slytherin seeker in midair in the process. It seemed they would go to any means to catch up, even by breaking the rules, and interfering in the game. Slytherin were winning purely, with their amazing skills and techniques.

Madam Hooch, who was refereeing the match, justly stopped all play, and the highly intelligent student and seeker, Draco Malfoy, was taken down to the ground, and the spell reversed. Miss Parkinson ran down to him, to see that he was all right, like a real friend and fellow housemate should do.

“All my limbs are in one place. It takes more than a simple stunning spell to stop me, unlike Saint Potter,” he admitted, proving he was harder to beat than some might wrongfully think.

She took his broom, and brought out a small glass phial, containing a poison green concoction.

“It’s a potion Professor Snape helped me brew. He’s the best teacher at Hogwarts!”

She found her handkerchief easily, because she’s a very organised girl, unlike Longbottom who can’t differ between rat spleen and leeches, and dabbed some of the potion on it. Then, she started polishing the broom handle with it.

“There. That should help you fly faster than Potter with his stupid Firebolt,” she said happily, handing it back to him. With that, she turned round, and went to resume her seat in the stands, among the other Slytherins.

The game resumed, and the Gryffindor team could never manage to catch up. Miss Parkinson was cheering with her group of Slytherin girlfriends. The adversaries didn’t even know of a way to react, and they were making what had been promised to be, a highly exciting game, a very boring drone, which a Potions lesson would have outstripped, in the time it takes to catch Potter breaking rules. Miss Parkinson lifted her own wand in the air and muttered, “Serpensortia!” She is a very wise girl and knows how to choose her spells. She wasn’t breaking any rules at all, but merely, trying to heighten the audience’s level of attention. A long snake wound round Weasley’s broom, and he started yelling and nearly fell off his broom in fright, not unlike clumsy Longbottom. It seems Potions class, isn’t the only thing Gryffindor students can’t handle. They are also quite known, for the catastrophic results they obtain.

Miss Parkinson turned to look at Miss Granger, who didn’t seem to be acting in her usual know-it-all manner.

“Hey Granger! Feeling pity for your poor Weasley?” she shouted over to the Gryffindor stands. But it seemed that Miss Granger had turned dumb, because she didn’t answer back. She probably was too scared, showing that Gryffindor students weren't as brave as they were deemed to be.

The excitement grew like a bubbling potion, as Malfoy showed how excellent a seeker he truly was, and spotted the snitch. He zoomed after it, and Potter, who had obviously noted nothing, finally reacted, and was flying behind him, until the referee’s whistled blasted and the cheers erupted from the stands.

So, the Quidditch Cup was won by the worthy house of Slytherin, who had shown yet again, that not only did it consist of the best students, but it also had the skill and wit, to remain in first place, undefeated.



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